New SHIP Film Pitch: The Black Sparrow. (Warning 🛑 Long Read)

Update: Due to recent comments I made a few changes to where one of the characters is now more involved in the action. Plus fixing a few grammatical errors lol. Thanks again for the support and critiques, hopefully we can get this off the ground.

Hey Everyone. So this is a pitch I’ve been siting on for a while but haven’t had the right platform to post it in. Thankfully this is the perfect place to promote it. Okay so the title of the film is called The Black Sparrow. And here’s a brief description before we begin. Our heroines real name is Donna Blake. Her civilian clothes would be a black t-shirt, blue jeans, black boots and her badge on her waistline. Picture our heroine with a Black Canary style attire. Her suit would be a black leotard with fish nets, black leather jacket, biker gloves, black lipstick, boots, black eyeshadow and she would sport a domino mask. Essentially the theme is black. For our villains we first have Nux, who’s a muscle and goon for hire. He sports a ski hat, a t-shirt, cargo pants, a combat vest and some shades. And for our primary antagonist, is Lynx. She’s the one who has it out for Sparrow and has a personal hatred towards her for this story. At first she wears a nerdy girl outfit with a button up, heels, glasses and skirt. However towards the end of the story she switches to a black suit with a skirt and black makeup. For the casting there are 3 people I had in mind to play the roles. For Nux he would be played by Rock. Lynx would be played by Kayla. And for our heroine, my top choice would be Alicia. With that out of the way let’s begin.

Donna Blake is a police detective of the Capital City Police Department. But when she’s not wearing blue, she switches to black. She fights as the heroine Black Sparrow. She’s gained the peoples trust by protecting the city. They see her as an icon. And most of all a hero. But that all changes tonight.

Donna is at home after a long day of patrolling as an officer. She turns on the tv and looks at the news to see what’s going on in the world. Nothing seems of interest so far, until a breaking news report saying that a recent jail break by an unknown criminal and an assailant has transpired yesterday. And the whereabouts of these criminals are unknown. Donna takes this news to heart because she is part of that search team and still can’t find any trace of them. Not as a police officer. But maybe someone outside the law can track them down and stop them. Donna turns off the tv and quickly goes to her room to change. We see her open her closet with her costume and gear. She takes it out and undresses from her civilian clothes to her outfit. She quickly changes into the hero Black Sparrow and strikes a heroic pose. She heads out in search of her mark. We see Black Sparrow monitoring her phone using surveillance cameras around the city. Nothing of interest so far, after a few minutes or so she found something.  And it is not good. She looks to see a thug kidnap a woman from off the streets. The facial recognition from her phone reveals that he’s the assailant that was on the news. They enter the building. She puts her phone away into her jacket and quickly follows them inside. Black Sparrow stays alert for any surprises that may come her way as she slowly walks through the dark hallway.

Suddenly she hears the woman screaming for help but is interrupted by the thug holding her body and covering her mouth. Black Sparrow rushes towards the sound of the scream. She finally walks in to find the woman gagged and tied up. Sparrow standing resiliently asks who the thug is and why he has a hostage. The thug reveals himself to be Nux. He expected some approval from her thinking that she knows who he is but clearly Black Sparrow has no idea. Despite seeing the reports on him. She thinks of Nux as a random thug. Some lowlife who preys on the weak and primarily women. He jokingly responds to her saying that maybe she’s right but at the same time he’s hoping to get arise out her. He even tries flirting with her while also fondling the woman. This angers Sparrow very much. She angrily tells him to let her go. Nux of course threatened to hurt the hostage if she doesn’t back off. But she isn’t going to give up that easily. Not a chance she says. Feeling hesitant and a bit on edge as she slowly walks towards him, he throws the woman to the side. She crawls away from the two. Both prepare to fight as they walk In a circle waiting for the first person to make a move. They stop.

Without hesitation Nux throws the first punch. And now the battle begins. Sparrow easily counters Nux’s attacks. He starts getting tired, to which Sparrow uses that to her advantage. As he stops to take a breath Black Sparrow delivers a fast right hook sending him towards a wall. He holds his face angrily and gets back into the fight. She’s Landing each blow flawlessly. Thinking to herself that she’s definitely going to win this fight and that he doesn’t stand a chance. But that feeling of victory left her, as Nux manages to catch Sparrows fist. Sparrow looking shocked while Nux chuckles at what he just did. She try’s to break free but Nux pulls her in and performs a counter punch. The punch made her fall to the floor. Sparrow feeling a bit dazed, Nux decides to use this opportunity and he picks her up to give her a bear hug for about a minute. She struggles at first but then she breaks free. She has a moment to breathe and when she finally catches her bearings she looks back at Nux angrily. He smiles at her and then proceeds to air smooch just to taunt her.

That enrages Sparrow even more. She runs towards Nux and they begin to lock hands and both test their strength. You see Sparrow slowly losing and struggling to hold her grip. Nux starts calling her weak while he appears to be winning. But she makes up for it by hitting him with 3 knee attack’s to Nux’s groin. He backs up slowly and makes a hilarious face while holding his groin. And suddenly falls down on his knees. She laughs and mockingly asks if he’s alright. That easily pisses him off which results in him getting up and landing a good punch on her which sends her falling. She’s fazed for a moment but shakes it off. Because of that, it also angered her. She quickly gets back up and locks eyes with Nux. He does the same while trying to recover from that knee shot.

The fight continues. The fight is getting intense as both opponents are now determined to win. There’s back and forth punching between Black Sparrow and Nux, each one landing a powerful blow than the other. Eventually Sparrow comes out on top by countering Nux’s attack and landing an even powerful punch knocking him out. After taking him down, she feels tired and catches her breath. And after a moment of rest she quickly resorts back to her witty self. She starts to act cocky and making fun of him while he’s “unconscious” saying he wasn’t so tough. The woman yells out for help while shes still gagged. She quickly helps the hostage by removing her binds and gag. She cries for a moment and Sparrow reassures her that it’ll be alright and that she’s safe. The woman looking hopeful hugs her quickly and continuously thanking Sparrow. Black Sparrow smiles feeling proud of herself. She steps back but you slowly see that woman turn that fearful and innocent look into a menacing smile. Sparrows smile fades away with a look of confusion towards the woman’s sudden grin.

We pan behind Black Sparrow and you see that Nux gets up and grabs a bottle and rag. He pours a handful of chloroform on the rag and slowly makes his move on Black Sparrow. Sparrow asks why the woman’s face is like that, but all of a sudden Nux slowly walked up and Bear hugged her from behind while giving her the chloroformed rag. She tries to break free and hopefully fight off the effects, but she is no match for the chloroform. And Nux is too strong at the moment. He lets her go only to have her feeling dizzy. Her visions blurry and is walking all disoriented. The woman chuckles a bit and sarcastically asking her if she’s alright. Black Sparrow looking at the woman and Nux angrily feeling betrayed. The woman tells Nux to get her. He nods with a grin and walks towards Sparrow. Sparrow starts to fight back despite getting chloroformed. He easily dodges each of her attacks. They both laugh at her thinking how funny she looks just flailing her arms to throw a punch. But instead of landing in blows, she’s taking them instead. Nux starts punching her back to back. She falls over, and tries to get up but Nux won’t let her. He kicks her while she’s on the ground. That ends when he picks Sparrow up from the ground. He punches her over to the woman. She locks Sparrows arms and Nux starts pounding her stomach, her face and multiple low blows. The woman passed Black Sparrow over to Nux and proceeds to do the same. The only difference is, she’s doing it with absolute aggression and more brutal. Almost as if this is personal for the woman.

While this is happening we see Black Sparrow in agonizing pain as she’s taking these blows. After almost a full session of getting beaten, they drop her on the floor. She’s on her hands and knees hoping to crawl away, but is easily stopped. Nux picks her up and decides to get payback from earlier. He knee shot Sparrow in the crotch 3 times by Nux. Now holding her crotch and cradling, almost immediately after that the woman pulls her hair to pick her up. And then delivers a sucker punch which knocks her unconscious. We see her laying down trying to open her eyes but eventually it all went to black for her. Nux picks Sparrow up and puts her on his shoulder. He looks at the woman and she smiles saying we’re going to have so much fun. They both smile at each other. Nux picks up Sparrow and places her on his shoulder. He quickly smacks Black Sparrows ass as they walk away to the next room.

Sparrow wakes up moments later to find her hands and legs chained to a wall. She questions what happened only to find Nux with his arm’s crossed and smiling while also looking at her menacingly. Sparrow feeling a bit scared tries to look away. We then see the woman again only this time she pops up on a television. She reveals she was the mastermind and that this was a setup to lure her. She states that while she is impressed by her skills she is also disappointed by her being dumb enough to fall for a trap and get captured. Black Sparrow asks her why is she doing this to her. And that’s she’s done nothing wrong to her. Feeling angered by that response, without hesitation she explains why. Her name is Lynx. A criminal who’s the sister of a villain Sparrow put away a long time ago named Jax. Because of that he died in prison only a month ago. And now she plans to get her revenge by making sure Sparrow feels humiliated and suffers just like her brother. But a lot worse. She recaps her about the break out. She revealed that her and Nux were the 2 that escaped. And all of this was to get her into one place and do the deed. Sparrow tries to apologize for what happened and tells her she doesn’t have to do this. But she easily ignores her nagging. Lynx nods at Nux. He nods back. Black Sparrow confused on why they’re nodding. Asking both of them what are they going to do to her? Lynx responds saying she’s about to find out.

Nux walks up to her menacingly and grabs her cheeks. He squishes her mouth and shakes it around just to tease her. He lets go, then starts to fondle her breast slowly and grips them just to make them hurt. Then he starts to caress all of her body. From her hair, to her face, to her breast and to her crotch. Eventually he starts kissing Black Sparrow. Sparrow is struggling a lot. Because of course she doesn’t want any of this. But you start to slowly see her getting a little aroused. Her pride is starting to wear thin when Nux starts slowly rubbing Black Sparrows crotch for a minute or two. Lynx mocks Sparrow asking her how she’s feeling while Nux is doing this to her. Sparrow trying to act resilient barks back telling him to stop, but of course he doesn’t listen. If anything her screams are arousing both him and Lynx even more. Nux starts fingering Sparrows crouch furiously. And while she tries to hide it eventually she lets out a loud moan. Letting both Lynx and Nux know the session is working tremendously. He turns her around smacks her ass repeatedly. You start to see the look of fear and disgust in Black Sparrows eyes as she’s being spanked by this lowlife thug. As he was done spanking her, he decided to unlock the chains to let her have a little “freedom”. She feels weakened and fazed lying there on the floor.

Nux picks Sparrow up from the ground and holds her to the wall while he slowly unzips her jacket. Taking it off her and throwing it to the side. Then he proceeds to rip open her suit to reveal her breast. Nux easily gets aroused by this. He starts to grope, suck and slap her breasts. As this is happening Black Sparrow is constantly begging him to stop. But of course he isn’t listening. She starts to wonder why she’s letting this happen to her. She’s Black Sparrow, she shouldn’t be ravaged like this. They couldn’t do this to her. That notion keeps playing in her head over and over. But also the notion of is she kind of enjoying this? As he finishes playing with her breast he drops her. She slowly crawls away hoping to escape. She almost makes it but Nux is standing by the door smiling. He pushes her back on the floor.

Then he puts Black Sparrow on her knees to prepare her for a satisfying punishment. But before they do anything,  a door opens to a secret room. And we see Lynx walk out. As it turns out Lynx was watching the whole thing in the other room. She begins to taunt Sparrow letting her know this is far from over. Lynx tells Nux to hold off a moment while she takes off her mask to see Donna’s face. Sparrow backs away from both of them, but Nux grabs her and holds her tightly so she can’t escape. She struggles but Lynx was successful in removing the mask. Black Sparrow puts her face down, but Nux forces her head up by pulling her hair back. All to reveal Donna Blake. Lynx looking at Donna in shock and awe. It all makes sense now how a cop put her brother away while also being a superheroine. Nux compliments her about how a cop this hot can be a superhero. But at this moment she wasn’t a hero no longer. Lynx reveals that she’s going to make her life a living hell by telling the world who she really is. As it turns out the room Lynx was watching in, is a control room for an old tv station. She plans to record everything that happens next and show the public Black Sparrow’s identity and how much of a shameless superheroine slut she is.

Donna begs her not to, but Lynx laughs at this seeing how she almost pity’s her. Lynx walks back into the room and grabs a camera from the recording station. She sets up a live stream and hits the record button. So now everyone can view this next session. Lynx introduces herself and makes a grand speech about how society failed her and her brother. As well as how bad Superheroines are to this world. As she finishes she points the camera at Donna with her mask off ready to be ravaged by Nux. She introduces her and Donna shamefully looks away. Lynx tells Nux that it’s time to give the people a good show. Lynx sets down the camera in a good position and goes to the control room to get an important item. The suspense is worrying Donna. Lynx walks out holding a black toy penis in her hand. Donna starts to struggle hoping to get away, but Nux hold her in place.

Lynx smiling menacingly holds Donna’s face and inserts the toy in her mouth. Going in and out repeatedly. Donna continues struggling but it’s no use. Lynx mocks her asking how it feels? And Donna looks at her angrily showing how she feels in this situation. She gives Donna one last push into her throat and pulls it out. Nux lets her go and she begins coughing and breathing hard. Lynx continues taunting her by letting her know that she’s not through with her yet. Lynx looks at Nux and tells him it’s time to give her the real deal. Donna now looking scared, while Nux smiles and does as he’s asked. He unzips his pants to reveal his penis.

Donna frantically moving backwards getting away from Nux. But is easily grabbed by the leg and dragged back towards him. She struggles but its not enough. He then puts Donna on her knees. She fights to get away from his dick, but is quickly slapped in the face to get her settled. Nux slaps his penis on Donnas face teasing her, and then finally he instantly inserts his penis into Donna’s mouth. He holds it in there a moment to let her feel what’s coming next. Then he grabs her hair and forces her to suck on his cock. Going in and out repeatedly for a few minutes. All while Donna angrily keeps hitting her hands on his legs trying to stop him. At first you start to see that Donna is hating it and continuously struggling but at the same time she’s feeling a sense of arousal. He gives her one big push into his cock, and he pulls her head back to give her some air. Moments later he pushes her to her hands and knees so that she can continue to make Donna suck. As it slowly intensifies Nux threatens her to do the work. She ignores him, but then he angrily pulls her head back and tells her again. Stating that she either does it right or else he’ll kill her on the spot.

Looking shocked we then see Donna just suddenly give in as if there’s no use in resisting any more. So she instantly grabs Nux’s penis and begins stroking him. After a few minutes she receives a massive load drooling from her mouth and on her face. Lynx makes fun of her by stating how much she can take a big load in her mouth. Nux then puts Donna back on her hands and knees. He faces her body to the camera to show her ass. He pulls the strap to the leotard to reveal her pussy. He spits on her Pussy to get it wet and ready. He proceeds to finger her intensely. Each moment as he does this, she falters and is on the verge of cumming. Afterwards Lynx comes back to have her fun. Only this time she’s equipped with a strapon. She mounts on her then proceeds to put her toy cock in Donna’s ass performing anal. We see an evil grin on Lynx’s face and Nux’s face as she’s fucking Donna.

This was the day Lynx was waiting for. She is finally getting the payback she wants. Lynx pulls Donna up and onto her chest. She then proceeds to grope Donna’s breast while she is being fucked. Feeling left out Nux comes in and puts his cock In her mouth. He proceeds to perform oral once more but very intensely this time. Afterwards he lets one more load in her mouth before and Lynx giving her one last push in her ass. She falls to the floor quaking, now mouth filled with cum. They both look at her wondering what to do next with a nasty grin. Donna looking up at them and asks them to stop. Lynx pulls her hair up and tells her that they’re not done just yet. She looks at Nux and asks is Donna she ready for her final act.

For the final scene, Nux lays down on his back and places Donna on top of him to perform missionary, while Lynx performs oral. This goes on for a good while and you start to see her crying hoping that this will end. After a full session he finally climaxes inside her, while Lynx’s toy climaxs on to Donna’s face. They both back off putting their clothes on and look to see the cum filled and defeated Black Sparrow laying on the ground.

Lynx goes back to the camera and states to the viewers that this is what the great Black Sparrow has been reduced to. Lynx stops the recording and she walks back to look down on Donna saying this is for my brother. She takes pictures of Donna with her phone. Showing her cum smeared face and body. And now Lynx tends to release the recorded footage and photos for the whole city and most likely the world to see. She kisses Donna on the lips as a way of saying goodbye. Both Lynx and Nux make their way to the exit. But as they leave we slowly pan back to Donna who is lying face down smeared in cum, crying and sobbing about what happened and what’s going to happen. This isn’t going to be the end of her career as a cop and her life. But this was also the end of Black Sparrow. 

And that’s it. I know it was a long read sorry In advance. But also thanks for taking the time to read. Hope you enjoyed it and maybe something may come out of this. Take care.